The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

Essay topics:

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The figure below illustrate the amount of energy consumption from 1980 to the estimated amount in 2030. In the figure there are 6 types of energy providers. The usage of all energy providers increase in the 50 years period except hydro power. As we see in the graph, the usage of petrol and oil is in the maximum point in all the 50 years period. coal and natural gas are almost in the same trend and the amount of Coal usage is estimated to go on 27-28 quadrillion in the year 2030.
for different energy sources like Nuclear, solar, wind, and Hydropower we see almost a little
change from 1980 to the estimated amount in 2030.
Natural gas consumption is estimated to be constant in the 2015 to 2030 period but petrol and oil consumption is increased In the same period. It can be seen the consumption of nuclear and solar/wind energy providers
are in the range of 0 to 7 quadrillions

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Coal
...ximum point in all the 50 years period. coal and natural gas are almost in the same ...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...on 27-28 quadrillion in the year 2030. for different energy sources like Nuclear, ...
^^^
Line 2, column 94, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d, and Hydropower we see almost a little change from 1980 to the estimated amount...
^^^
Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... nuclear and solar/wind energy providers are in the range of 0 to 7 quadrillions ...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51234567901 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56793833069 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.475308641975 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6582092345 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.375 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.375 5.23603664747 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184849530425 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909142090068 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694957439784 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975399656762 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689670503834 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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