The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph depicts how many thousands of people were born and died in the initial period and also it is predicted for the future in New Zealand between the year 1901 to 2101.
Overall, it can be manifested that birth rates were higher than death rates in the starting period, in future it will become the same for a year after that death rates surpass the born rates.
First of all, the birth rates of Kiwis in the year 1901 was 20000 and death numbers was almost half of it(around 10000). Dying rates were steadily increased by the decades till the year 2001, while it was dramatically risen in childbirth numbers. It went at all time the highest numbers with just under 70000 in during the 1950s to 1960s after that, it had dropped down in numbers. In the year 2021, birth and death rates are just over 50000 and 30000 respectively.
However, it is forecast that numbers of death will rise and birth rates will decrease at the end of the year 2101. Furthermore, both rates for New Zealanders will become the same around the year 2041 with the figure of just below 50000 people. In the end, it will have different around 10000 to 12000 people between birth and death rates. The figure for the former one will be around 58000 and the latter will over 40000 people in New Zealand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 217, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'risen'.
Suggestion: risen
...he year 2001, while it was dramatically rose in childbirth numbers. It went at all t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54310344828 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0613905873 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504310344828 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3226649595 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.4 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195364162115 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885403322664 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439367800937 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128619129175 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228673890286 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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