The graph below gives information about fossil fuel energy demand and availability in the country of Freedonia from 1980 to 2060 (projected).
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Illustrated in the given line graph is the changing patterns in Freedonia's fossil fuel energy need and availability over an 80 year period since 1980.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that while fossil fuel energy demand in this country is forecast to increase, its counterpart - energy availability is predicted to fall over the studied period.
In 1980, the energy available in Freedonia was a handsome number of 8 units. This quantity, however, declined marginally to almost 7 units two decades later, yielding a negligible decrease of one unit. Such a drop was more pronounced in the case of energy demand at a whopping 2 billion megajoules in 1990. The figure then experienced a gradual increase to just under 5 units in the next two decades and is predicted to rise to nearly 6 units, which will be the same as energy availability in 2040.
From the chart it can be seen that the fossil fuel available moderately declined until it is predicted to meet the demand in the year 2040. Such a figure is expected to go into a nosedive from 6 units in 2040 to more or less 4.5 units in 2060, making a decrease of 1.5 units in two decades. In contrast, the need for fossil fuel energy is foreseen to still rise until 2060 to nearly 7 billion megajoules.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 178, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, still, then, while, in contrast, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65777777778 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64844355606 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3927076409 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.444444444 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236552806305 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106611399718 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660099720248 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161507186532 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412149055594 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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