The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors- agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services- to the Uk economy in the twentieth century.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart compares the different extent of contribution of three economic zones, namely agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services, to the United Kingdom economy in one century commencing from 1900.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there was a downward trend in almost all surveyed contexts, albeit to a different degree; such a decrease was more pronounced in the case of agriculture. Moreover, it is clear that business and financial sector was the only area to experience a dramatic rise.
In 1990, about nearly 50% of the UK economy was agricultural work. However, this proportion got swollen to about 53% by 1950, making an overall decline of just 3% for a 50 year period. While manufacturing sector was just under 40% at that time, the figure experienced a slight decrease to around 35% in 1975. This made it become a more significant sector compared to agriculture as this area made an exponential nosedive to approximately 10% in the year 1975.
In regard to business and finance, the figure for this factor contributed about just 3% to the UK economy in the 1900s. The proportion then started to rise gradually to nearly one tenth and one fifth of the total economy in 1950 and 1975 respectively. The figure of business and finance, however, experienced a pronounced upsurge to around 40%, making an overall rise of about 37% as compared to the first year studied. As a result, it was the most significant sector of the UK company in the 2000s.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, then, while, as a result, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92156862745 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86149851989 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521568627451 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6881689935 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177796917509 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724752196824 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426579563791 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109399093201 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027943743229 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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