The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1970 to 2010

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The graph below gives information about household car ownership in Britain from 1970 to 2010.

The given graph delineates changes in the number of cars per British household over a period of 40 years.
Overall, it is noticeable that the percentage of households which own one or more cars rose, while the opposite was true for families without a car.
From 1970 onwards, the figure for one - car households stood at 35 % and after five years of fluctuating, this rate jumped rapidly to 55% in 1985. over the next 15 years, it constantly changed then reached a peak of 65% in 2010. On the other hand, the proportion of families had two or more car started at just over 10% before slightly falling in 1975 . Afterwards it is forecasted to gently recover to about 25% by over the course of 15 years, eventually the figure witnessed the highest point around 40%.
As illustrated, granted, the household with no car was the most common type from the late 1970s, but it immediately saw a dramatic drop from more than half to 30% only in 20 years after that. Notably, this percentage remained stable until significantly falling to roughly 15% .

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...til significantly falling to roughly 15% .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69398907104 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60403099773 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688524590164 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1140997322 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.375 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205187660729 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794720364569 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521391731437 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121284027257 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148203474293 0.0819641961636 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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