The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Illustrated in the given line graph is proportion of city dwellers from 1970 to 2020 with a projection to 2040
from an overall perspective, it is obvious that the upward trends were observed in all investigated nations, with malaysia witnessing the greatest growth. it is also notable that philippines saw the most fluctuated increase.
regarding the two dominant countries, in 1970, both philippines and malaysia had the same number of city residents, accounting for nearly one third of total population. afterwards, the figure for philippines increased significantly to nearly 50 percent in 1990 before decreasing gradually to just above 40 percent in 2000 and recovering steadily from then onwards. malaysia, although started at a slightly smaller percentage than philippines, surpassed it almost throughout the given period except for 1990 , from which malaysia saw a double increase to 80 percent by 2040
as for the other countries, the city population of thailand and indonesia both accounted for less than 20 percent in 1970. however, these figures rose to 30 percent in 30 years later, from which malaysia percentage remained stable for the next 20 years and it is estimated to observe a dramatic increase to 40 by 2040. meanwhile, the figure for indonesia surpassed philippines' from 2010 at 40 percent and it is estimated to increase by 20 percent by 2040
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, regarding, so, then, third, well, while, as for, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 965.302439024 119% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22272727273 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96698733757 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 106.607317073 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1794654889 43.030603864 184% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.142857143 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4285714286 22.9334400587 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 5.23603664747 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214181852061 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981669361157 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659951968077 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151243683649 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849556066916 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.2329268293 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.