The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the line illustrates the proportion of the citizen in four Asian nations living in cities during the period of ninety year starting 1970 with forecasted to 2030 and 2040.
In summary, there was an upward trend in the figures for the individuals living in four cities. Additionally, Philippines and Indonesia witnessed dramatic growth of the rate of population, but Philippine still ranked first. Likewise, the figure for the citizens of ThaiLan was highly increasing, but which was lowest.
In the year 1970, the figure for in Philippines was highest, at approximate 31%, followed by in Malaysia and Thailand was lower than that, accounting for 30% and in the vicinity a fifth percent, respectively. In contract, nearly 12% belonged to the figure for the population in Indonesia.
In subsequences fifty-three years, Philippines and Indonesia witnessed dramatic rise of the population, at roughly 75% and nearly 60% in turn. Likewise, while the figure for in Philippines saw a influtation before stablize increase, to approximately 50%, the figure for in Thailand was lowest, nearly 40%.
By 2040, the figure for Malaysia is always predicted to increase highest, accounting for nearly 80%, but still the rank first, follow by in Indonesia and Philippines is expected slightly increase, to nearly 60% and more than 50%. In contrast, approximately 40% belong to in the figure for the population living in Thailand, which is lowest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, likewise, still, while, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 228.0 196.424390244 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2850877193 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98736373836 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504385964912 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 3.36585365854 297% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8899780747 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131982311513 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065561067817 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562718899444 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951682957448 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602046760233 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.