The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The provided line graph illustrates the propotion of population in four Asian nations: the Philipines, Indonesia, Thailand and Malaysia. This data spanS from 1970 until 2020 AND includes the predictive figures up to 2040.
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there are projected increase in the population in living in cities of all countries examined, with Malaysia dominating the chart for the vast majority of the period, and the Philippines are IS predicted to overtake the Thailand and Indonesia to hold the second position in the half of the timeline.
Starting with Malaysia , its urban populace experienced a significant surge in 1970, and forecasts predict that this trend will persist, potentially exceeding 80% of the country’s total population in 2040, higher than any other countries listed. Similarly, Indonesia almost exactly mirrors this upward trend, albeit at a much lower rate. Despite starting at the lowest point, nearly 15%, Indonesia’s urban population rate rose considerably, surpassing Thailand and Philippines to become the second highest before reaching just above 60% in the final year.
Moving on to Thailand’s urban population growth, although consistant, was not pronounced as that Malaysia and Indonesia. It is predicted to reach about 50% of the total population in 2040. Turning to the Philippnines, this country present a interesting case. Initial stability in urban population figures was followed by an abrupt ascent . Although a decline has been observed post-1980, the predictions are optimistic. projecting that approximately half of the population will reside in urban areas in 2040.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of the timeline. Starting with Malaysia , its urban populace experienced a signif...
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Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the Philippnines, this country present a interesting case. Initial stability in ...
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Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...figures was followed by an abrupt ascent . Although a decline has been observed po...
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Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Projecting
...t-1980, the predictions are optimistic. projecting that approximately half of the populati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, similarly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57312252964 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01222933508 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 106.607317073 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628458498024 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.3123795902 43.030603864 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.5 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208257978258 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779971091031 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591259218898 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138142300724 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409820121916 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 40.7170731707 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 23, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of the timeline. Starting with Malaysia , its urban populace experienced a signif...
^^
Line 4, column 239, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... the Philippnines, this country present a interesting case. Initial stability in ...
^
Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...figures was followed by an abrupt ascent . Although a decline has been observed po...
^^
Line 4, column 420, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Projecting
...t-1980, the predictions are optimistic. projecting that approximately half of the populati...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, similarly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 965.302439024 146% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57312252964 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01222933508 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 106.607317073 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628458498024 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 283.868780488 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.3123795902 43.030603864 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 117.5 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208257978258 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779971091031 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591259218898 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138142300724 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409820121916 0.0819641961636 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.92 8.06136585366 123% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 40.7170731707 206% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.