The graph below gives information about US government spending
on research between 1980 and 2008
The line graph illustrates the US government expenditure on 4 diferent
researches from 1980 to 2008.
It is clear that , the US government expenditure on Health, Space, Energy
and other increased over a period of 28 years. Also, the figure for Health
was the most popular research field during the period shown.
In 1980, the amount of money spent on Health was highest approximately
8 million dollars, while only roughly 3 million dollars invested on Energy.
Over the next 28 years, there was a decrease in the amount of money
poured into Health was 2 million dollars in 1984, but later reached a peak of
21 million dollars in 2004 and then slightly declined by 2 million dollars in
2008. By constract, the figure for Energy was remain stable until 1992, then
there was a significant rise to about 6 million dollars at the last year.
Looking at the other research, the amount of money paid out for Space and
Other were about 7 million dollars in 1980. From1980 to 2008, the figure for
Space grew to about 10 million dollars and Other grew to 7.5 million dollars
in the end of the period after fluctuations during the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Researches
...government expenditure on 4 diferent researches from 1980 to 2008. It is clear that ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s from 1980 to 2008. It is clear that , the US government expenditure on Health...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...expenditure on Health, Space, Energy and other increased over a period of 28 yea...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Was
...8 years. Also, the figure for Health was the most popular research field during ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...By constract, the figure for Energy was remain stable until 1992, then there was a ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...y was remain stable until 1992, then there was a significant rise to about 6 milli...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...nd Other grew to 7.5 million dollars in the end of the period after fluctuation...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94472361809 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46284388462 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537688442211 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0622783682 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 3.83414634146 417% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149133520707 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941441919258 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103285153425 0.0843802449381 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.066982867666 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0831722810684 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.