The chart below shows information about students studying six main
subjects at a US university in 2010.
The bar graph compares the number of male and female research
students who were studying in six different subjects at a US university in
2010.
It is clear that Finance major was the most selection of both sexes in
2010, the opposite was true for Engineering. While the largest difference
was the number of male and female student paticipating in Mathematics.
As can be seen from the chart, both male and female students have
an equal number of enrollees in finance was approximately 230 students. A
Acounting course had the number of students were smaller, with 170 male
students and 200 female students. In addition, a Maketing witnessed the
number of female students were more than male students about 40
students.
Looking at the chart in more detail, 200 males were doing their
research in Mathematics in 2010 whereas female were only about 60
students. Morever, the figure for male students who joined in Economics
field was 150, almost twice as much as female students.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the opposite was true for Engineering. While the largest difference was the numbe...
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...eering. While the largest difference was the number of male and female student p...
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Suggestion: An
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Suggestion: Students
...students were smaller, with 170 male students and 200 female students. In addition, a...
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Suggestion: Students
...ere more than male students about 40 students. Looking at the chart in more detail...
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Suggestion: Students
...10 whereas female were only about 60 students. Morever, the figure for male students ...
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Suggestion: Field
...ale students who joined in Economics field was 150, almost twice as much as female...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61885513228 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 15.6679409943 43.030603864 36% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.75 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 3.83414634146 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204103917588 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105014034333 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950625640058 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783067544912 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105005706217 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.