The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph reflects changes in the popularity of five distinctive activities ay one social centre in Melbourne, Australia over a 20-year period ending in 2020.
Overall, film club was the most prevalent activity over the period. Meanwhile there was an increase in the number of people participating in table tennis and musical performances, with the most dramatic rise being seen in the latter. In contrast, amateur dramatics experienced a decrease in the number of participants.
Looking at the chart in more detail, in 2000, among the five activities, amateur dramatics and table tennis were the least favorable, with negligible figures of 26 and 16 participants, respectively. Similarity, there are no data in the number of people taking part in musical performances. In 2010, the figure for table tennis showed a minor rise, while amateur dramatics saw a contrasting trend. Both activities reach the same figure at 20 paticipants. Over 10 years, amateur dramatics had lost popularity and hit the lowest point with only 6 participants. Meanwhile, there has been a surge in the number of people particpating in table tennis. In 2005, musical performances was first introduced, and following 15 years, around 18 participants was recorded in this activity.
With regard to the remaining activities, film club was the leading activity showed for participants, with around 64 in the first year. Following 10 years, this figure dropped slightly at 60 participants before a mosdest recovery to 65 participants at the end of the period. In addition,
The number of people taking part in martial arts underwent a fluctuation throughout the period, reaching at around 35 participants in 2020.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s at the end of the period. In addition, The number of people taking part in mart...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, while, in addition, in contrast, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 269.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29739776952 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08897104205 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53531598513 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 3.36585365854 357% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9887739349 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.785714286 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180693621241 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635720019413 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483230601545 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121153364155 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433522711197 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s at the end of the period. In addition, The number of people taking part in mart...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, while, in addition, in contrast, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 965.302439024 148% => OK
No of words: 269.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29739776952 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08897104205 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53531598513 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 283.868780488 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 3.36585365854 357% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9887739349 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.785714286 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180693621241 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635720019413 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483230601545 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121153364155 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433522711197 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.