The graph below shoes the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004

The chart presents the data on the degrees of using fish and some different kinds of meat measured as grams per person per week in a European country over a twenty-five-year period starting from 1979. Generally, while one experienced a rise, there were declines in the remaining three.

According to the graph, the consumption of chicken fluctuated slightly and rocketed gradually before becoming the most significant degree of using fish and some different kinds of meat in 2004 (at 250 grams).

Besides, the trend for fish consumption and two types of meat consumption: Beef, Lamb are different from the trend for chicken consumption. Starting from the highest point in the graph (at more than 200 grams), the degree of using beef went up and down wildly in the first fifteen years of the period (from 220 grams to 180 grams). Then, it still varied and dropped to more than 100 grams. Similar to the trend for beef consumption, the trend for lamb consumption fluctuated slightly and went down to 120 grams in 2004. Finally, the trend for fish consumption decreased minimally and nearly stayed the same at 48 grams in the last year in the chart.

As can be seen from the chart, chicken contributed the largest proportion of consumption throughout the period, whereas fish had the smallest share.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...were declines in the remaining three. According to the graph, the consumption ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, first, if, so, still, then, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94520547945 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67143971412 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538812785388 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6758602893 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.333333333 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256639925159 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101429689262 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101168243666 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172827282506 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891427685265 0.0819641961636 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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