the graph below show the value of clothing exported from bangladesh between 1998 and 2012 and the pie chart shows the destination and value of exported clothing in 2012 summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comp

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the graph below show the value of clothing exported from bangladesh between 1998 and 2012, and the pie chart shows the destination and value of exported clothing in 2012. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant

The presented graph illustrates the worth of costumes exported from Bangladesh in a 25-year period from 1998 to 2012, while the following pie chart demonstrates the destination and the value of exported clothing in 2012.

Overall, the value of exported clothing witnessed an increase over 27 years, while the European Union and Turkey made up the largest and smallest proportion of its destination and worth in 2012, respectively.

Throughout the 25-year period, the rate observed a gradual upward trend as it reached the lowest of approximately 3 billion in 1988 and merely passed 5 billion in 2004. Afterward, the value of costumes rise dramatically since its highest rate was recorded in 2012, accounting for 20 billion.

Specifically, in 2012, the European Union was the most popular destination among the five countries, making up 60% of the worth with an income of 11.38 billion dollars. USA and Canada respectively stood at 4.53 billion and 0.87 billion, accounting for 24% and 5%. Japan and Turkey were the least likely to be the destination for the exported costumes as only 2% and 1% of them arrived in these countries, earning 0.4 billion and 0.36 billion respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17616580311 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89534865605 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569948186528 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.1246934222 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.714285714 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5714285714 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.28571428571 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253109605963 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121884455174 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144255611903 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188952681203 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.156263833148 0.0819641961636 191% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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