Many people believe that good planning is the key factor to success in life, while others believe that other factors like hard work or luck are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, people have widely differing views with regard to the question of whether good planning is the key factor for a successful life and career, or there are other crucial aspects that lead to success, for instance, hard work or fortune. From my personal viewpoint, both opinions have positive impacts on people's future life.
Evidently, good planning is one of the skills that are provided in primary education. In the first analysis, this essential technique will ensure the events in a person's life happen without mistakes or unfortunate situations. A specific plan should contain several problems that an individual possibly has to deal with and solutions to them. Therefore, unlucky circumstances will be less of a concern to the individual. Secondly, well-planned events will be more uncomplicated for people to fully manage them. Since the events have already been prepared specifically, a change after the planning process will not be considered an unsolved difficulty, but require little effort. Consequently, good planning can be seen as one of the most crucial factors leading to success.
On the other hand, there are various viewpoints regarding the statement of several other aspects that can help people to achieve successful lives and careers, for instance, working hard or fortune. Practically, no pain no gain is a popular idea that has been used for education purposes. In order to complete the settled goals, individuals can be dependent on no one but their own ability, as the presented idea has become an evident fact in life. Moreover, fortune is also a factor for an individual to be successful and happy, therefore it is not as crucial as the other ones. As luck requires no effort to achieve, it also has minimal impact on the events throughout people's lives since it can only help decline the unlucky possibility.
In conclusion, good planning is an essential skill that can help individuals achieve success since it ensures that life events happen fortunately and help people to take full control of their life. Additionally, hard-working and luck are also crucial factors, since working hard is the only method to complete one's dreams, as well as luck will decline the difficulties in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 68, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...e widely differing views with regard to the question of whether good planning is the key factor for a s...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...l technique will ensure the events in a persons life happen without mistakes or unfortu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16208791209 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80474324166 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510989010989 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4920684933 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.4375 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0625 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262688193254 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876556830525 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759858017464 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184292573859 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722370183548 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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