The graph below shows the amount of potatoes, pasta and rice eaten by the people of UK, between the years 1976 and 2001
The line graph illustrates the intake of three food items: potato,pasta and rice eaten by the people of a European country from 1976 and 2001.The unit is given in grams and it represents the consumption by each person in a week.
Overall it can be seen that pasta was the most popular to the people of UK over the whole period of time except only from 1976 to 1983.
Above 400 grams of pasta was consumed by each person in a week before 1976 in this country.At that time the consumption of rice was exactly 350 grams, which was slightly higher that of pasta.In 1976 the consumption of potato was laveled with pasta and crossed the consumption of rice.The consumption of potato reached at it's peak at 1983 with the figure was 420 gram.After three decades people consumed potato only around 250 grams in a week.In 1991 pasta became the highest consumed food at 510 grams while rice intake dropped to about 280 grams. Finally in 2001 pasta intake continued at 510 grams while rice eating per person further dipped and reached nearly at only 200 grams.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , pasta
...s the intake of three food items: potato,pasta and rice eaten by the people of a Europ...
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Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...f a European country from 1976 and 2001.The unit is given in grams and it represent...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ular to the people of UK over the whole period of time except only from 1976 to 1983. Above...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: At
...n in a week before 1976 in this country.At that time the consumption of rice was e...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
...which was slightly higher that of pasta.In 1976 the consumption of potato was lave...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...sta and crossed the consumption of rice.The consumption of potato reached at its pe...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'gram' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'grams'.
Suggestion: grams
...ts peak at 1983 with the figure was 420 gram.After three decades people consumed pot...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...ak at 1983 with the figure was 420 gram.After three decades people consumed potato on...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ak at 1983 with the figure was 420 gram.After three decades people consumed potato on...
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Line 5, column 443, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... potato only around 250 grams in a week.In 1991 pasta became the highest consumed ...
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Line 5, column 549, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...rice intake dropped to about 280 grams. Finally in 2001 pasta intake continued at 510 g...
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Line 5, column 683, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d and reached nearly at only 200 grams.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64171122995 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31585997251 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.4926829268 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.664927136 43.030603864 394% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 217.0 112.824112599 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.75 22.9334400587 204% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203508180894 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144814004889 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520673542464 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166501831335 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451281097597 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.2329268293 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.71 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.52 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.9970731707 186% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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