The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal over the period 1967 to 2007. It measures CO2 emissions in metric tonnes. According to the information, CO2 emission in UK and Sweden decreased gradually while CO2 in Italy and Portugal increased considerably .
In 1967, 11 metric tonnes of CO2 released in UK slightly fell down over the period between 1967 to 1987 before it dropped to approximately 9 tonnes by 2007. At the same time, Sweden reached to the highest peak of over 10 tonnes in 1977 but this rate sharply declined to 5 tonnes.
From 1967 to 1997, CO2 emission in Potugal rapidly went up from 1 tonnes to 5 tonnes. The average amount of CO2 in Italy began over 4 tonnes and grew steadily up 7 tonnes. CO2 emission in Portugal as well as Italy remained contanst at the end of period between 1997 and 2007.
Clearly, CO2 emission changed considerably over a 40 year period

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7005988024 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54410499746 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538922155689 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1263215829 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2222222222 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318671626465 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156918943089 0.103423049105 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153165346552 0.0843802449381 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197409434101 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.148612945125 0.0819641961636 181% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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