The graph below shows the average daily spend of three categories of international visitor to New Zealand from 1997 to 2017.
The given graph illustrates the average expenditure per day of global travelers to NZ on business, holiday and paying a visit to relatives during a period of 20 years.
It is evident that expenses for a trip to friends and family members’ places was by far the lowest. In contrast, the majority of visitors showed the most preferences toward commercial meetings in the first half of the period , while the predilection was diverted to vacations in the last year.
In 1997, daily spending on vacations was at about 190$, followed by the lead of that on business with over 250$, and far beating that on the remaining category by around 90$. In the next 5 years, NZ’s international income of these 3 types increase exponentially before reaching their peaks at 330$ for commerce, 270$ for vacation and nearly 220$ for friends and family gathering.
From around 2002 to 2010, the figures for 3 kinds witnessed a dramatic deceleration and after that fluctuated considerably. Over the last 7 years, whereas the money spent on family visits fell and rose within a narrow range, that of other two still experienced the same trend. In the last year 2017, holiday superseded business in terms of international revenue with approximately 250$ and 210$ respectively, while visitors’ expenditure on family trips was at the bottom with under 140$.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$190'.
Suggestion: $190
...aily spending on vacations was at about 190$, followed by the lead of that on busine...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$250'.
Suggestion: $250
... the lead of that on business with over 250$, and far beating that on the remaining ...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$90'.
Suggestion: $90
...hat on the remaining category by around 90$. In the next 5 years, NZ's intern...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n the remaining category by around 90$. In the next 5 years, NZ's internatio...
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Suggestion:
...gory by around 90$. In the next 5 years, NZ's international income of these ...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$330'.
Suggestion: $330
...entially before reaching their peaks at 330$ for commerce, 270$ for vacation and nea...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$270'.
Suggestion: $270
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$220'.
Suggestion: $220
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$250'.
Suggestion: $250
...nternational revenue with approximately 250$ and 210$ respectively, while visitors&a...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$210'.
Suggestion: $210
...nal revenue with approximately 250$ and 210$ respectively, while visitors' expe...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$140'.
Suggestion: $140
...mily trips was at the bottom with under 140$.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, still, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 223.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08968609865 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94062943921 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 106.607317073 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62331838565 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.2556623213 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.875 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.875 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132299345159 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500910691738 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0416923106755 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0699023095994 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177009757429 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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