The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.
<span id="docs-internal-guid-2756a097-7fff-b503-5660-7a113c851945"><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;text-align: justify;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">The line graph compares figures for daily travel by workers in the UK using three different forms of transport over a period of 60 years.</span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;text-align: justify;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"> It is clear that car is </span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">by far</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"> the most popular means of transport for UK </span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">commuters</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"> throughout the period shown. </span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-weight: 700; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; text-decoration-line: underline; text-decoration-skip-ink: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Also</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">, while the numbers of people who use car will grow remarkably, an even faster growth rate may be recorded for train passengers. The figure for bus users is, however, expected to fall steadily.</span></p><p dir="ltr" style="line-height:1.7999999999999998;text-align: justify;margin-top:0pt;margin-bottom:8pt;"><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"> In 1970, around 5 million UK commuters travelled by car </span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">on a daily basis</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">, while the bus and train were used by about 4 million and 2 million people respectively. In the year 2000, the number of those driving to work rose to 7 million and the number of </span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">commuting rail passengers</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"> reached 2 million </span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-weight: 700; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; text-decoration-line: underline; text-decoration-skip-ink: none; vertical-align: baseline;">before</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"> </span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">a plateau</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"> till 2010. </span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-weight: 700; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; text-decoration-line: underline; text-decoration-skip-ink: none; vertical-align: baseline;">By contrast</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">, there was a small drop of approximately 0.5 million in the number of bus users.</span></p><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;"> </span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">By 2030</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">, significant more computers will drive to work, reaching almost 9 million of them, and the figure for train users is also predicted to observe a twofold growth (compared with the </span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">initial figure</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">), to nearly 5 million. </span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-weight: 700; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; text-decoration-line: underline; text-decoration-skip-ink: none; vertical-align: baseline;">On the contrary</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">, buses are predicted to become </span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0); font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">the least popular choice</span><span style="font-size: 13pt; font-family: Calibri, sans-serif; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); background-color: transparent; font-variant-numeric: normal; font-variant-east-asian: normal; vertical-align: baseline;">, with only 3 million daily users, a decline of around one thousand travelers.</span></span>
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-09 | WIWI UMAR | 73 | view |
| 2019-09-02 | hoang ngoc my | 89 | view |
| 2019-09-02 | hoang ngoc my | 11 | view |
| 2019-09-02 | hoang ngoc my | 78 | view |
| 2019-08-02 | yen070998 | 84 | view |
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. 11
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. 89
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose, and can even be damaging. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? 84
- Many people are afraid of leaving house because of crime. Some think more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others think little can be done. What is your view? 84
- The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 7511.0 965.302439024 778% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 746.0 196.424390244 380% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 10.0683646113 4.92477711251 204% => Less chars per word wanted.
Fourth root words length: 5.22618413065 3.73543355544 140% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.27132984021 2.65546596893 311% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 169.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.22654155496 0.547539520022 41% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1785.6 283.868780488 629% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.4 1.45097560976 165% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 124.0 22.4926829268 551% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 476.022904444 43.030603864 1106% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 1251.83333333 112.824112599 1110% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 124.333333333 22.9334400587 542% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0173127476191 0.215688989381 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0180431258908 0.103423049105 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.01503954391 0.0843802449381 18% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0173127476191 0.15604864568 11% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 88.2 13.2329268293 667% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -122.06 61.2550243902 -199% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 38.3 6.51609756098 588% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 61.1 10.3012195122 593% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 42.31 11.4140731707 371% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.5 8.06136585366 143% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 40.7170731707 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 81.0 11.4329268293 708% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 51.6 10.9970731707 469% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 52.0 11.0658536585 470% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.