A glance at the provided line graph illustrates the figures on average in millions of the British travelers going by car, bus, or train each day from 1970 until the prediction in 2030.
It is clearly apparent that car was reported and will be projected as the most popular transportation among the commuters. In addition, while the usage of bus for travelling showed a downward trend and was predicted to decline, the use of car and train reported the opposite.
Looking in more detail, in 1970, the number of commuters who choosed car was reported at arround 5 millions which surpassed the other mode of transportations. The figures then increased significantly and predicted to reach 9 millions in 2030. The same pattern observed in those who traveling by train. Although it only showed at 2 millions in the beginning of the periods, it climbed gradually and reach plateau in 3 millions in 2000 to 2010. The figures then projected to jump considerably by approximately 2 millions. Finally, the number of commuters who use bus decreased marginally from 4 millions in 1970 to the prediction number at 3 millions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...n, while the usage of bus for travelling showed a downward trend and was predicte...
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Suggestion:
...to the prediction number at 3 millions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95212765957 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99242195899 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7271558708 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.444444444 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318339741734 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120688186656 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107559780686 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232795375977 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972020697521 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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