In this modern era, it is debated that traditional newspaper and magazines will be replaced with the popularity of e-books and advanced technology. I strongly disagree the statement and will discuss my point of views in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, before the invention of internet and smart gadgets, printed newspaper and magazines are the first line of information resources chosen by vast majority people in the world. Surprisingly, year by year, massive development of technology makes people tend to spent their times more on their smartphones or tablets. In consequence, most of them change their preference to the electronic version of books, newspaper, and other reading sources because they find it more efficient. However, slow but sure, people will realize that modern technology and e-books would not totally beat the existence of traditional newspaper and magazines as we know the internet and gadgets has bad impact on our health and several groups of people are not familiar and comfortable with it.
Related to health issues, recent study conducted in Indonesia said that using gadgets (either for reading or gaming) for 7 hours or more per day had significant association with visions impairment, headache, and difficulty in focus. I am sure that this adverse effects has been felt by a lot of people so that they now switch back to the printed books. Despite that, many people said that electronic books can not provide comfortable and exclusive vibes that any printed reading materials can give us. Additionally, there are still groups of people who found modern technology is difficult to use such as geriatric and disability people. Hence, the traditional newspaper and magazines or event braille version of resources are still needed.
To sum up, although e-books and other online information resources are now massively used by most people, traditional reading materials will not extinct easily.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31270358306 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7814042142 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586319218241 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5142837712 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.916666667 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235310926018 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846190096998 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716502478079 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14847042923 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550671878103 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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