The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamses students studying in France, Russia, and America between 2000 to 2015.

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The graph below shows the average number of Vietnamses students studying in France, Russia, and America between 2000 to 2015.

The supplied graph illustrates data about the number of Vietnamese students studying in France, Russia, and American from 2000 to 2015.

In general, there was an upward in the trend of Vietnamese students in France and America, whereas the opposite was true to students arrived in Russia. However, the most striking feature from the graph in which the US is the most attractive destination for Vietnamese student compared to two remainders during the given period.

In 2000, the number of Vietnamese citizens learning in France hit the highest point, about 3.5 million. Standing at 3 million, the grade of Vietnamese learners enrolling in Russia compared to double of learners in American. Over the next 5-years, a remarkable increase of 2 million people showed the grade Vietnamese people learning in America. By contrast, Russia and France experienced a slight fall of 2.2 million and 2.5 million.

During the 5-years, the index of Vietnamese scholars educating in the US saw a significant growth of 3 million, while the figure for Russia decreases considerably to about 1.8 million. After declining moderately, the stability of 2.5 million has seen in the level of Vietnamese students coming to France. The period of 5 years, the general trend was upward. However, the most attractive country, drawing Vietnamese’s attention is America, about 5 million. At the same time, the figure for France and Russia accounted for respectively 4.5 million and 2.5 million.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ion. Standing at 3 million, the grade of Vietnamese learners enrolling in russia ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, whereas, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1273.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13306451613 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85118854947 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495967741935 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.82743224 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.727272727 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5454545455 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160699352045 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780573623936 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998466163395 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14953531182 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135673582288 0.0819641961636 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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