The graph below shows changes in global food and oil prices between 2000 and 2011.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates fluctuations in global rates of food and oil between years 2000 and 2011.
Overall, it is evident that both recorded a rise in their prices until 2008. In 2000, the price of food was between 80 to 100 points while the average price of oil was above 20 dollars and the undulation continued until 2003 in between these prices. After 2003, the rates of both items recorded a steady rise, nevertheless various variations were observed, the price of oil reached its peak above 120 dollars and even food prices observed a noteworthy increase around 220 points between 2008 and 2009
However, a steady decline was observed in figures between 2008-09 and the prices plummeted down to 140 in 2009 for food and below 40 dollars for oil. Still, the rates began to soar again, though there were certain fluctuations. Prices for both commodity again recorded a mere downfall a year after in 2010 but the prices increased gradually. 2011 recorded the highest price index for food (around 240 points) while the oil prices rose above 100 dollars.
In conclusion, though both the commodities recorded variations in prices over the period of 11 years, the food index recovered from downfall and attained its highest rate while oil wasn't able to gain its peak again.
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...and attained its highest rate while oil wasnt able to gain its peak again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, nevertheless, so, still, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1061.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91203703704 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39844753601 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532407407407 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 103.167339793 43.030603864 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.625 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.375 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185352616295 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099111641914 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772189186883 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145811344597 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735419901985 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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