The graph below shows the changes in maximum number of Asian elephants between 1994 and 2007.
The bar chart compares, the figure of Asian elephant with different nine countries from 1977 to 2004. The data are calibrated in thousands.
Overall, it can be inferred that population of elephant had decreased over the period of time in all countries except Cambodia and Laos.
At the first glance, it can be observed that India had the highest elephants in the both year, approximately 10,000 in 1997 and 7000 in 2004. Next, Myanmar stood in second position but Fall in elephant number was comparatively lower than India. Similarly, Malaysia and Thailand experienced a dramatic fall in the figures of an elephant and both nations reached at nearly the same level of 1000 in 2006.
Proceeding further, less than or nearly 1000 elephants recorded in Vietnam and China, which was decreased Nominally. It is noticeable that, in 2006 around two hundred elephants disappeared in Sri Lanka. Lastly, only Cambodia felt a nominal rise in the number of an elephant, while Laos appeared to be unchanged in the figure of an elephant.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...tion of elephant had decreased over the period of time in all countries except Cambodia and La...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iland experienced a dramatic fall in the figures of an elephant and both nations ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, lastly, second, similarly, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04093567251 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71324863134 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637426900585 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5546623679 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119248347617 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474007222791 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273793559836 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0695389161626 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178684145101 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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