We are now surrounded by advertising. Further, the amount of advertising in the world is increasing at an alarming rate. Discuss the positive and negative effects of this phenomenon.
The amount of advertising in the world has indeed been snowballing as societies increasingly embrace a more capitalist style of economic organization. Although this trend brings with it a number of positive ramifications, negative aspects are also
quite numerous. Both sides will be analyzed in this essay.
To begin, advertising begets wealth and wealth begets opportunities for employment and economic competitiveness, and this is a positive thing. Take China, for example. Today, most Chinese city roads are awash in advertising. This advertising does a lot
to encourage spending, which acts as a cornerstone for the development of any economy. As spending increases, demands for jobs increase and as jobs increase, the overall wealth of a people grows. Thus, advertising can be seen as the base of economic development and as a critical tool to the developing of economies.
However, despite the positive things brought about by advertising, it is not without negativity. To take the Chinese example further, advertising within China has spread from cities and permeated natural areas of the country as well. The tea mountains of Hang Zhou, a once picturesque landscape, are now an eyesore as they are covered in billboards. Thus, it is argued that advertising contributes negatively to the aesthetic quality of many natural regions.
Although opinions surrounding the merits of advertising are mixed, it is felt the growth of advertising is much more of a positive than negative trend within the world. Thus, for the sake of economic development, it is hoped advertising increases the world over and helps to bring people together through the sharing of global brands.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36603773585 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10583231602 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577358490566 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8242847117 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310248319557 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878406162273 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0642698833498 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145053261084 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786122962253 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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