The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1974 and 2004.
The line graph supplied illustrates changes in the amount of four meat categories, namely fish, chicken, beef, and lamb, in a European nation over a period of 25 years.
Overall, the figure for the consumption of chicken witnessed a remarked increase over the period given, whilst that of beef, lamb, and fish declined during that period.
Amongst these foods, in 1979, beef was of the highest popularity, standing at almost 220 grams per person per week. In second place were chicken and lamb, with around 150 grams in the same year. the amount of fish, meanwhile, eaten per individual per week was approximately 50 grams at that year.
As can be seen from the chart, beef lost its prevalence markedly over a 25-year period, scaling down by around 100 grams over the period provided, reaching 120 grams in 2004. By the same token, there was a moderate fall in the consumption of lamb, dropping from 150 grams to above 50 grams. Much as the figure for fish stepped down, there was a much less significant decrease in it, compared to the others. This virtually levelled off around 50 grams in all years.
The amount of chicken used, on the other hand, hit the greatest number in 2004, amounting to 250 grams. By 1980, this had exceeded the consumption of lamb. Likewise, it took the head from beef in 1990.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...with around 150 grams in the same year. the amount of fish, meanwhile, eaten per in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, second, so, while, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72925764192 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40029332761 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572052401747 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.2945339121 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.23603664747 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0934100967707 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358405745306 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375865007534 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063934193104 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401694522887 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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