The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors- agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services- to the UK economy in the twentieth century.
The bar graph compares the percentage of contribution of agriculture, manufacturing and business and financial sectors to the economy of the United Kingdom between 1900 and 2000.
Overall, both agriculture and manufacturing proportion of contribution decreased dramatically in the given period. It is also noticeable that business and financial contribution to the economy increased significantly.
In 1990, agriculture contributed roughly a half to the UK economy and rose slightly to peak at just over 50% in 1950, before declining to hit a low of roughly 22% in 2000. Similarly, manufacturing sectors' contribution started at around 45% at the beginning of the period and dropped steadily at approximately a fifth in 2000.
Business and financial services contribution was the smallest number in1900 at almost 4% but the figure displayed a continuous growth to reach a high of about 35% in the final year, to become the biggest contribution among 2 other sectors.
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- Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes and what solutions can be offered? 73
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors- agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services- to the UK economy in the twentieth century. 61
- Governments should spend money on railways rather than on roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. 78
- The government should offer free prenatal classes for expecting parents. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 223, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to become the biggest contribution among 2 other sectors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49668874172 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36271280004 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58940397351 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4116969758 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.333333333 112.824112599 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1666666667 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273120803304 0.215688989381 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142075599338 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918926198058 0.0843802449381 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176086233154 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735908588528 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.2329268293 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.4140731707 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.