The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given line graph gives information about how much wheat is exported between 1985 and 1990.
Overall, the figures for all regions witnessed upward trends with the exception of Australia’s wheat trading which decreased slightly.
Starting the period as the highest figure, Canada’s wheat export experienced a small drop of 3 million tonnes in the following year and then reached an all-time peak of 25 million tonnes in 1988. After hitting the bottom of 14 million tonnes in 1989, this increased by 5 million tonnes at the end of the period, standing close to the figure in the first year. The quantity of wheat exported in European Community followed a similar trend, but its increase was less pronounced, rising by 4 million tonnes over a 5-year period despite mild fluctuations along the way.
On the other hand, Australia exported 15 million tonnes of wheat, registering the lowest figures among three given regions in 1985. Its wheat export slightly grew from 15 to 17 million tonnes in 1986 before continuously declining in the subsequent years, hitting the all-time low of 12 million tonnes in 1990.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...for all regions witnessed upward trends with the exception of Australia's wheat trading which de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14130434783 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69381073149 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9240809649 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.142857143 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102840605522 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605918954391 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385965977694 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776461060122 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333613423531 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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