The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
The line charts provide information of wheat exportation in 3 different regions: Australia, Canada and European between 1985 and 1990.
In general, over the 15 years period, the research recorded a downward trend in wheat exportation in Australia, contrary to an upward trend in European Community. Meanwhile, Canada had a fluctuation in the number of wheat exports.
In Australia, the number of wheats was sold outside the country started at 15 million of tonnes in 1985, the smallest number of 3 areas in that year, then slightly growth to 16 million in next year, before suddenly and gradually dropped to about 11 million of tonnes in 1989 and remained that number by the end of 1990.
In Canada, the chart shows that in 1985, the number of wheat exports accounted for the highest numbers among three regions at 18 million of tonnes, before minor dropped to 17 million in 1986, then peaked at 25 million of tonnes 2 years later, and decreased again in the following year to under 15 million and finally increased to more 4 million in 1990.
In European Community, the wheat exports were fluctuated during this period from just under 17 million of tonnes in 1985 to a peak at 21 million in 1990.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... increased to more 4 million in 1990. In European Community, the wheat exports w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, then, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8125 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54949162469 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514423076923 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.667748912 43.030603864 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.833333333 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6666666667 22.9334400587 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104188725269 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686216423109 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474358034407 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758727136281 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505003654686 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.35 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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