The given graph compares the amount of wheat exports among Australia, Canada and Europeam Community from 1985 to 1990.
In Australia, starting from the lowest point of 15 tonnes in 1985 in comparison with the two other areas, wheat exports saw a mere 1 tonnes increase in 1986 and the following period experienced a gradual fall.
In Canada, wheat exports peaked at 25 tonnes in 1988, which was the highest point compared with that in Australia and European Community after witnessing a slight drop from roughly 19 tonnes in 1985 to 17 tonnes in 1986. After that, the amount decreased sharly to less than 15 tonnes in 1989 and rised again to reach the starting point.
In European Community, from 1985 to 1986 saw a marginal decrease of 2 tonnes, which was similar to Canada's wheat exports in the same period. The amount went up exclusively 1 ton in 1987 and remained constant until 1988 before went up considerably to reach the peak at more than 20 tonnes in 1990.
Overall, the amount of wheat exports in Canada and European Community was around 20 tonnes, which was nearly double of the amount in Australia at the end of the time in the graph.
- The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71921182266 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41025175023 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492610837438 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.8024825631 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.857142857 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 5.23603664747 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0767359030804 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451120475999 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324081823536 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572476041121 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237963108645 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.69 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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