You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.1- Say where you think you left the papers.2- Explain why they are so important3- Tell

Dear Sir,

I am Ken, one of the guests attending VNA Healthcare Conference on last Tuesday at your hotel. This letter is kindly to request your help because I accidentally left some important documents at your hotel. To find them, I suggest that you should examine the BBQ restaurant on the fifth floor , at which I had my dinner after the long meeting.

These papers are our company's market research for establishing new clinics which will be huge contribution to healthcare service in our city. More importantly, they must be sent to the project manager by the end of this week. Besides, the invitation letter to Global Healthcare Event which I will attend next month was still left in the documents.

I greatly appreciate if you can pay a visit to the BBQ restaurant and find my documents. Should are they found, please kindly inform me by my phone number 0906 909 282 or email Ken_Tran@gmail.com instantly. I will come to yours as soon as I can.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,
Ken Tran

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...some important documents at your hotel. I remember that I entered the BBQ restaur...
^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...com. I will come to yours instantly. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85380116959 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90689748835 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.695906432749 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.58172043 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4545454545 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213001328133 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711045325664 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109474625571 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10289071255 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10085879896 0.0580467560999 174% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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