Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply for a job as an English teacher that your college - Saigon Community College - is recruiting via an advertisement on The Youth newspaper.
According to the advertisement, the working time is at night which is most suitable for me as I am available from 6pm to 11pm for all weekdays. Moreover, there are several courses needing teachers and English for business is the one I would like to work on. With the growth in number of international companies nowadays, business English becomes more and more necessary for people who would like to work in a multi-national environment.
I have been running my own company and investing in stock and real estate for over ten years. Therefore, I have much knowledge and practical experience in the language used in business situations as well as communication. Besides, a BA degree in English language and five-year experience in teaching business English are what makes me the most appropriate teacher for this course.
I am looking forward to an interview from you.
Yours faithfully,
Ken Tran
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, look, moreover, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 32.9175257732 43% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07222222222 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03512126872 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644444444444 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.6271055231 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.444444444 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251792332602 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914195638346 0.0766984524023 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584273287318 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14653299945 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532002975981 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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