The graph below shows how money was spent on different forms of entertainment over a five-year period. write a report for a university lecture describing the information shown below. write at least 150 words.
The bar chart below illustrates the money management of world entertainment markets in three different countries like Asia, Europe and The United States over a five-year period from 1995 to 2000.
The United States is the world's most country spending lots of money for the entertainment markets for the full 5 years whereas Asia is the least one and Europe is in the middle stage. starting from the year 19950 to 2000 there is a gradual increase can be seen during world entertainment market.
In terms of entertainment sources such as television, publishing, music, videos and cinemas, almost all countries are giving priority for publishing. Television catches the second priority always. while years passing only increment can be seen in case of both money and fun sources.
In conclusion, every year each country spending higher amount of money for enjoyment and fun. around 250 billion dollars are spending for such type of entertainments while reaching the year 2000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... one and Europe is in the middle stage. starting from the year 19950 to 2000 there is a ...
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... Television catches the second priority always. while years passing only increment can...
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Suggestion: While
...ion catches the second priority always. while years passing only increment can be see...
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... amount of money for enjoyment and fun. around 250 billion dollars are spending for su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, whereas, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1835443038 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75089386938 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 235.8 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.8354928374 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.375 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187080653581 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797717549691 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563942704879 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122079753917 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487833801195 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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