Universities should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every person in this world has the right to get proper education.So iam strongly agreed with the argument that universities must accept equal number of male and female students in each subject. As we all know that now a days most of the universities are trying to give equal seats for all genders at all levels. Government also giving a better support for such type of phenomena.
Even though universities providing equality,some of the seats are hiring by male students only. For example, Aeronautic engineering, mechanical engineering like that. I think this is because of the cultural thinking of the society. Because they are believing that such type of posts can be afford by males only. So that they are discouraging their children from that also.Government must do some classes about the awareness of different courses to the students before they will go to the universities. So that students can easily choose such type of courses.
As yeas before some universities provides better courses to male students only. But now things has changed. In this developing world universities are providing equal priorities t them his is because of the improving educational standards. Moreover all of them are very concern about their rights. So in my point of view iam strongly agreed with the subject. If society is hesitating to do that, government must take proper action against them and should punish them too.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, i think, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0686695279 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83856184817 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56652360515 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2282261058 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7333333333 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24787901692 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696091727656 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866045505479 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168016554808 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584289397265 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.