The given graph depicts data regarding leisure pursuits that children in Australia and New Zealand take part in the most in 2007.
Looking at the chart, it is immediately conspicuous that Australians spent more time on outdoor activities. Meanwhile, New Zealanders enjoyed much of their time staying indoor.
In Australia, the most popular leisure pursuit was sports accounting for approximately 28%. 25% of Australian young population enjoyed Going to the park. Furthermore, the record illustrated that computer games and DVDs attracted the same proportion of Australian youth, 15%. Meanwhile, activities relating to books accounted for 10%. Art and craft were the categories enjoyed the least, which was 4% lower than that of books.
Turning to the data of New Zealand, the main recreational pursuit that accounted for 25% was Art and Craft. Activities regarding books and DVDs showed a similar proportion, 17%. Meanwhile, Sports and going to the park shared the same figure which was approximately 12%. In addition, children enjoying Computer games in New Zealand accounted for nearly 14%.
- The graphs show a comparison of the expenses in the UK and the US 11
- The graphs below show a comparison of the weekly expenses in the UK and the US in 2010 67
- The graphs below show a comparison of the weekly expenses in the UK and the US in 2010 73
- The graph below shows information about the activities that Australian and New Zealand children enjoy doing the most in 2017 43
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...yed much of their time staying indoor. In Australia, the most popular leisure p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, look, regarding, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44705882353 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85242566598 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594117647059 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.9993686778 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1666666667 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1666666667 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252259741987 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0904201974621 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641601348751 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159745948547 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364698474183 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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