The two pie charts illustrates a comparison of the weekly expenditures in both countries (US, UK) in the year 2010
Looking at the pie charts, it is conspicuous that spending on rent accounted accounted for the higest percentage in the UK, while in the US it was food. In addition, expenditures on DVDs were the lowest in both of the nations.
In England, the highest proportion was spent on accommodation, which accounted for 30%. Next, the rate of expense on food which was 12% lower than that on accommodation. Besides, 15% of people in this country spent amount of money on outdoor activities and transportation. The lowest percentage was books and DVDs activities, which made up 12% and 10% of their expenses, respectively.
Turning to America, foodstuffs contributed the largest proportion of spending at 25%. In addtion, the rate of expense on accmmodation was only 20%. Transportation, entertainment and reading each of them inculuded 15%. Similar to the UK, America spent a lowest rate on DVDs, which consisted of 10%
- The graphs below show a comparison of the weekly expenses in the UK and the US in 2010 67
- The graphs show a comparison of the expenses in the UK and the US 11
- The graphs below show a comparison of the weekly expenses in the UK and the US in 2010 73
- The graph below shows information about the activities that Australian and New Zealand children enjoy doing the most in 2017 43
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 68, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: accounted
...it is conspicuous that spending on rent accounted accounted for the higest percentage in the UK, wh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 252, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...d 15%. Similar to the UK, America spent a lowest rate on DVDs, which consisted of...
^
Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...est rate on DVDs, which consisted of 10%
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09411764706 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19924299004 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570588235294 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.250764187 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142472072182 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423618419023 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072153191335 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114571404037 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111573117583 0.0819641961636 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.