The given pie charts illustrate the weekly expenditures of Americans and British people in 2010.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately conspicuous that the amount of money spent on fundamental needs was outstandingly high. On the other hand, weekly DVDs-related payments had the least involvement.
In England, the highest expense was on accommodation, 30%. Next, The proportion of money spent on food was 12% lower than that of Rent. Meanwhile, Spending on outdoor activities and transportations shared the same proportion, which both made up 15% of the budget of British residents. Lastly, DVDs and Books accounted for 10% and 12%, respectively.
Turning to America, Spending on fundamental needs, which are accommodation and food, was the highest. Specifically, the weekly rental payments of Americans accounted for 20%. Next, the cost of food supplies was 5% higher than that of Rent. Meanwhile, Transporting, outdoor and book-related expenditures were the same, which all made up 15% of the budget of American residents. Besides, DVDs made up for the lowest expense, 10%.
- The graphs below show a comparison of the weekly expenses in the UK and the US in 2010 73
- The graph below shows information about the activities that Australian and New Zealand children enjoy doing the most in 2017 43
- The graphs below show a comparison of the weekly expenses in the UK and the US in 2010 67
- The graphs show a comparison of the expenses in the UK and the US 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Americans and British people in 2010. Looking at the graph, it is immediately ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, lastly, look, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 169.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42603550296 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17675990725 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579881656805 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.347846816 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4166666667 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0833333333 22.9334400587 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0758839487575 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0304225240877 0.103423049105 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392920082313 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0613187997441 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400370341333 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.