The line graph illustrates the figures for investigation received by the Tourist Information Office in a particular city throughout six months in 2011.
Overall, it is evident that there were some significant changes, especially, enquiries got in-person stood out as the one having the most surprising change among three categories. Moreover, the amount of face-to-face and telephone enquiries experienced an upward trend, whereas letters and email shrank gradually to the end of the time in question.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that, at the beginning, telephone accounted for over 900 enquiries, holding the highest figure. However, in the next month, the number of enquiries received by telephone fell slightly to 800. From February, the figures for telephone raised continually until April, when it soared significantly from 1000 enquiries to approximately 1600 enquiries in Jun. On the other hand, in the first month, the number of investigations gained by letter and email particularly held almost 800 enquiries, representing the second-highest enquiry. Nevertheless, its figure shrank steadily until the end of the time in question, remaining at 400 enquiries, just making up approximately one-four compared with what the investigation received direcly did. Last but not least, the amount of enquiries obtained directly hit the bottom of over 400 in January. Surprisingly, its figures ascended dramatically to Jun, comprising over 1800 enquiries and is projected to rise continually.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, whereas, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1284.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60698689956 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17427903114 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 106.607317073 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64192139738 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3060054645 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.4 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 22.9334400587 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 5.23603664747 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260853840127 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101794108948 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113002338406 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210596972696 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147452512655 0.0819641961636 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 11.4140731707 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.