The graph illustrates the intensity of the utility of different kinds of communication given by Tourist Information Office in an area during half of a year in 2011.
Overall, the graph which is measured in the first half of the year focuses on three types of enquiries ( face-to-face, by letter/email and by telephones). The trends of in person and by telephone enquiry go upwards through the months while the remaining trend is the opposite
First of all, people contact each other directly keep increasing unstoppably over the period and takes the first place at the end of the graph ( about 1900 people ) despite beginning with the lowest position ( over 400 people ). Follow that, telephone users still rises but not continuously, it slightly falls in the first month and is stable from March to April.
Although the letter/email consumers have a better formation than face-to-face, the trend still decreases gradually in nearly two months (January to middle March) and sharply in almost two months (middle March to middle May) and it stays the same in until the end of May
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...year focuses on three types of enquiries face-to-face, by letter/email and by tel...
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...hile the remaining trend is the opposite First of all, people contact each other ...
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... the first place at the end of the graph about 1900 people despite beginning wit...
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... the end of the graph about 1900 people despite beginning with the lowest positi...
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...spite beginning with the lowest position over 400 people . Follow that, telephone...
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...ith the lowest position over 400 people . Follow that, telephone users still rise...
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...early two months January to middle March and sharply in almost two months middle ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, still, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71926710351 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597765363128 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.0585157068 43.030603864 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.0 112.824112599 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8 22.9334400587 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 5.23603664747 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153387626898 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810735181163 0.103423049105 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05569892892 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950361830829 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577762689325 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.2329268293 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.