The graph below shows the number of passenger railway journeys made in Great Britain between 1950 and 2004/5.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares statistic for rail journeys usage by passengers in Great Britain in using 3 different types of railway system over a period of 55 years, from 1950 to 2005.
It is clear that the trends for all means were very similar; however, Light rail & metro systems were the least popular. While the number of commuters using London Underground and National rail network rose considerably, there was a slight growth of light rail and metro system.
In 1950, there were 1000 million people used National rail network and 700 million use London underground. After that, light rail and metro system started operating in 1963 with approximately 30 million users. Then in 1980, most of the passengers didn't use light rail and metro system. By 10982, number of people used national network and London underground dropped significantly to nearly 600 million and 500 million respectively.
From 1982 to 1985, the number of people commuted by all 3 kinds of railway experiences a moderate recovery, with both national rail network and London underground achieved roughly 800 million passengers and Light rail & metro system got about 70 million passengers. However, between 1985 and 1995, the number of people who used National rail network and London Underground fell by 50 million, whereas Light rail & metro system remain stably at 70 million passengers. Finally, in 2004/5, all means of railway increased once again, at 900 million, 1070 million and 170 million respectively
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20083682008 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61905572797 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523012552301 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.06222762 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.3 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855955555916 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453048951822 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428291298517 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731254011666 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544240582892 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The line graph compares statistic for ra...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...period of 55 years, from 1950 to 2005. It is clear that the trends for all mean...
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Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... trends for all means were very similar; however, Light rail & metro systems were...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...growth of light rail and metro system. In 1950, there were 1000 million people ...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...s. Then in 1980, most of the passengers didnt use light rail and metro system. By 109...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... million and 500 million respectively. From 1982 to 1985, the number of people ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1243.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 239.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20083682008 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61905572797 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 106.607317073 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523012552301 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.06222762 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.3 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855955555916 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453048951822 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428291298517 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731254011666 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544240582892 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.