The given line chart illustrates the proportion of goods which were exported from Australia to Japan, the US, China and India during the period between 1990 and 2012.
It can clearly be seen that there was an opposite trend for the exported good of Australia to other four big economies between 1990 and 2012. In particular, China reached the highest percentage of Autralian exports in 2012 while India experienced the lowest figure.
Looking at the information in more detail, in the year of 1990, the proportion of Australian exported goods to Japan was around 27% and this shows a completely different picture that the figures for the US, China and India were lower, at around 13%, 3% and 2%, respectively. After 13 years, China and the US had a fairly equal proportion of Australian commodities, which made up approximately 10%. However, at the same year, the figure for Australian exports to Japan was around 20%, which was at least twice as high as that in the US and China (around 10%).
As illustrated, in 2008, the figure of exported commodities to China witnessed a sudden increase and reached the same level of Japan at around 19%. Also in the year of 2008, a similar proportion for Australian exported goods was recorded between the US and India, at around 7%. In the last year, the most striking point is that the percentage of China totally dominated those for Japan, the US and India (30%, 18%, 7% and 6% respectively).
- Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others, however, believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
- In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, and people can build houses in their own style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a situation? 61
- The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, while, at least, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79032258065 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64230766609 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491935483871 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 283.868780488 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.8330164754 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5555555556 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.23603664747 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190475147429 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940151829717 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472938424266 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139218533559 0.15604864568 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429714172468 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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