This is true that whether each person not only have to take care of their own diet but also their health or that responsibility should be taken care by the governments is a subject of debate. While reasons can be given to justify the former, the latter is much more preferable.
On the one hand, taking care of health and diet is the individual responsibility that is beneficial in some ways. Firstly, the most important reason is that you probably make a best decision for your own diet because each person have a different health status so the diet should be made suitably. Secondly, as the thinking that there are no other people understand their health better than themselves, people always feel happier and more comfortable when they can pick out what they need for their diet. For example,
On the other hand, other would agree that authority should also be responsible for their people health. The first prominent justification is that it is one of the government's inevitable responsibilities because people are an important part of every country and the direction of each nation is to make people healthy and well-off. Furthermore, the government can provide more healthy foods for their citizens because the authority can influence the food supply by offering more high quality production or import standard foods. Example, the governments in the recent years are more focused on producing and importing organic foods to improve the quality of people life.
In conclusion, for the reason mentioned above, although taking care the health and diet is the individual responsibility, it seems evident that government should also share this responsibility with their people.
- The graph below shows the percentage of Australian exports to 4 countries from 1990 to 2012. 67
- In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, and people can build houses in their own style. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a situation? 61
- Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others, however, believe that governments should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ortant reason is that you probably make a best decision for your own diet because...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12363636364 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80229893817 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523636363636 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.1281909465 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.9 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36832783496 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157759172576 0.084324248473 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0983853545027 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247169612039 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503765643332 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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