The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days.
The bar chart illustrates the rate of people who love cinemas in a European country in the timescale of 3 years from 2003,2005, and 2007.
Overall, most people showed their interest in going to cinemas on weekends while Monday to Thursday were the quiet time in the industry.
Look at the bar chart for more detail, we can see that Saturday was the most favored time for individuals to go to cinemas in 2003, at 40%, which was 10% higher than that of Sunday and Friday at the same year. The prominent feature was that the rate of cinema lovers chose Friday to visit cinemas remained stable throughout the remainder of time, at 30% in 2005 and 2007. Saturday continued to take the lead in the following years, 45% (in 2005) and 42% (in 2007) while people showed less interest in cinemas on Sunday, at 34% and 31% respectively.
From Monday to Thursday, there was a slight fluctuation. In 2003, the rate of cinema lovers on Thursday was 23%, which was over twice as much as that of Monday, at 10%. In 2005, this trend maintained steady, roughly at 14% from Monday to Thursday while 2007 experienced a significant variation, with its rock bottom was at 9% on Wednesday and its peak at 19% on Tuesday and Thursday.
- Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
- The graph below shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days. 73
- The bar chart belw shows shares of expenditures for five major categories in the United States, Canada, the United Kingdom, and Japan in the year 2009. 73
- Advertisements are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development? 78
- The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in 5 different countries 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55963302752 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46105940594 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54128440367 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6081268925 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.25 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.875 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134984372801 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750440749754 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640434491235 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115341260434 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637900263581 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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