The graph below shows in percentage temrs the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology in homes in the UK
The line graph illustrates the proportion of the Britsh using the latest devices, namely CD player, cell phone, desktop PC and the Internet over the period of 7 years, starting from 1996.
Overall, the most striking feature of the graph is that the figure for all of the newest technology witnessed an upward trend over the period
shown.
Looking at the graph for more details, in 1996, the CD player was the most popular device in the United Kingdom, at 60%. This figure rose steadily and finished at over 80% in 2003. A similar trend was also seen in the proportion of home computers, increasing significantly from 30% in 1996 to approximately 55% in 2003.
On the other hand, although mobile phone had the lowest starting point of 20% in 1996, it dramatically rose and surpassed the desktop PC at the beginning of 1999 to become the second most popular device, with 70% in 2003. Likewise, with a rapid pace, the figure for the Internet nearly tripled from 15% in 1998 to roughly 45% in the final year.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2023-08-22 | Vinty | 79 | view |
| 2023-06-11 | Phan Quang Tuan | 73 | view |
| 2022-10-14 | ducmap03 | 11 | view |
| 2022-08-24 | mary.ssherr | 78 | view |
| 2022-08-10 | mary.ssherr | view |
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ure of the graph is that the figure for all of the newest technology witnessed an upward t...
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Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itnessed an upward trend over the period shown. Looking at the graph for more...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, look, second, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 840.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7191011236 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45810753219 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589887640449 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9846914364 43.030603864 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0511537987814 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0247859513732 0.103423049105 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251022311703 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0365965847972 0.15604864568 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268790315892 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.