The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001.Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of employees from Netherlands,France, Sweden, UK and Germany that were absent for a day or more because of illness over the course of 10 years starting from 1991.
Overall, there was a significant upward trend in the number of workers having absence in Netherlands and Sweden over the period, while employees in France saw a considerable decrease at the same period. Another interesting fact is that the absence of employees in America and Germany underwent a moderate increase until the end of the time surveyed
To begin with, the figure for those having absence due to illness in Netherlands began the period at just under 5%, about 2% above those in Sweden. Over the next 5 years, the percentage of employees witnessed a decline to approximately nearly 4%, while workers with illness absence in Sweden rose slightly to nearly 3,5%.From 1996 to 2001, the number of employees in both two countries experienced a significant growth, surpassing the former figures and reaching a peak in 2001 of just under 5,5% in Netherlands and nearly 4,5% in Sweden
By contrast, the number of workers with illness absence in France saw a dramatic decrease from 5% to just above 3% over the first 5 years of the period before plateauing until the end of the time surveyed.In addition to, the figures for employees in UK and Germany were similar, at
around 2% in each country.
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- The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001 Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features and make comparisons where releva 73
- The graph below shows the percentage of workers from five different European countries that were absent for a day or more due to illness from 1991 to 2001 Summarise the information by selecting reporting the main features and make comparisons where releva 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: In
...uing until the end of the time surveyed.In addition to, the figures for employees ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oyees in UK and Germany were similar, at around 2% in each country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, while, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1175.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 238.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93697478992 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83283343531 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508403361345 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 353.7 283.868780488 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 22.4926829268 262% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 207.164186094 43.030603864 481% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 293.75 112.824112599 260% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.5 22.9334400587 259% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170933650274 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115152819945 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939234072202 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0986193704049 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0927753988087 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.6 13.2329268293 239% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.05 61.2550243902 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.3012195122 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.26 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.9970731707 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 11.0658536585 235% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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