The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates how much oil in the three different kinds of fuel was used in the UK from 1981 to 2000.
Overall, while the figures for natural gas and petroleum saw an increase, the data for coal's uses experienced a downward trend. Units in the essay are measured in million tonnes of oil.
Regarding to the production levels of petroleum saw a gradual increase for 2 decades. It started at just over 90 in 1981, it grew steadily up to approximately 140. This data was dropped remarkably to above 100 in 1990, before climbing into 140 in 2000, became the most popular fuel in the UK in the last year of 20th century. Likewise, the data for natural gas began at just under 40 in 1981, then it rose gradually to above a half in 1992, before rocketted to approximately 100 in 2020.
In the opposite side, the uses of coal faced up with the less famous fuel over 19 years. It started at the second popular oil in 1981 which was approximately 80. It dropped significantly to under a half in 1984, then a noticeable jump to 60 in 1986, before going down to over a third in 2000.
- The two bar charts below show the proportion of 14 to 16 year old students studying a foreign language in an English speaking country and the top three foreign languages Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make compa 56
- The graph below shows the percentage of the Australian workforce in five industries between 1962 and 2012 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 67
- In many countries today if people want to find work they have to move away from their families and friends Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 67
- The chart below shows the total number of minutes in billions of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories from 1995 2002 61
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...end. Units in the essay are measured in million tonnes of oil. Regarding to the produc...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, regarding, second, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39108910891 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55495907999 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0629434018 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11646045862 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473262673172 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510477952991 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079967716522 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067026490633 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...end. Units in the essay are measured in million tonnes of oil. Regarding to the produc...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, likewise, regarding, second, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39108910891 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55495907999 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0629434018 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11646045862 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473262673172 0.103423049105 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510477952991 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.079967716522 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067026490633 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.