Some people say that we do not need printed paper newspapers. Do you agree or disagree?
It is thought that nowadays the populations do not need printed paper news. From my point of view, in some situation i mostly disgree with this notion because of its drawbacks for the individuals life. The following essay will analyse this statement in detail.
First of all, in the industrialized world and with the appearence of modern technology that the rescident are just concentrate in their occupation and they have forgotten other fields of life, so newspaper is hugely significant for people life. Not only does the press provide numerous acadamic knowledge, social experience and valuable information for adolesence which improve their metality life, but also the creative and imagination abilities of teenagers can be advanced gradually, increased the economic background of their country. Furthermore, the socioeconomic problem can be narrowed where all people have the same opportunity to approach with the social knowledge. To illustrate, there was a vurvey by Kevin Climb, the famous interviewer and professor, which is expert about the sucess of prosgraduates who access to the journal everyday. The statistic demonstrated that neary eveyone has got plenty of achievement in their career.
However, we can not negate the weakness of this phenomenon when compare with online reading. The demerits effect can be affested by this trouble for our environment since this kind of papers was produced from nutural woods. Morover, many governments take advantage from this investment for their own revenue, various harmfull will led by this action to the young generations.
To conclude, though my agrument from the essay, i totally disagree with this statement, but newspapers still have some negative aspects for the society. The states need to have clear plans to improve their citizens for the nation's development.
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- Pollution of rivers lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment What are the possible causes of water pollution and what effects does this have on animal life and human society 61
- Today more people are overweight than ever before What in your opinion are the primary causes of this What are the main effects of this epidemic 61
- The use of corporal punishment physically hitting students in schools is in decline yet it should be used to improve behaviour To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- The most essential component of a person s life is his or her time at the workplace and life turns meaningless once no job satisfaction is obtained To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...notion because of its drawbacks for the individuals life. The following essay will analyse ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill analyse this statement in detail. First of all, in the industrialized worl...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...prosgraduates who access to the journal everyday. The statistic demonstrated that neary ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...plenty of achievement in their career. However, we can not negate the weakness ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...heir own revenue, various harmfull will led by this action to the young generations...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...this action to the young generations. To conclude, though my agrument from the...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...plans to improve their citizens for the nations development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, still, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42105263158 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8693174199 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.4328924784 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.846153846 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9230769231 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120839832673 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048481342033 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785939590714 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819373861299 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539274784925 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.