The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The line graph illustrates the number of old people
who are 65 years old and over in japan , Sweden and the Usa from 1940 to 2040
In 1940, the proportion of the old in three countries was almost equal. In japan , there was the lowest percentage at 5 percent
as opposed to the Usa which accounted for about 9 percent. Sweden had 7 percent of elderly.
By 1980 , in the Usa and Sweden , both of them had a moderate increase in ageing population
which were about 15 percent and 14.5 percent respectively.
On the other hand , in japan , there was a slight decrease which dipped japan to only 2.5 percent before it slightly increased to almost
7.5 percent at the present time.
In the future , Sweden will face a fluctuation in percentage. But , it is predicted between 2020 and 2040
that all three countries will have a considerable rise in the number of old people which will make the proportion of the old in
the three countries mostly similar.
Overall , in the past , there was the fewer elderly than the present. Nevertheless , all three countries will change into complete ageging societies
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, nevertheless, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96335078534 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58931241273 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549738219895 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.670060022 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.333333333 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159042479561 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537308613205 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781277810564 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605275073702 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565502998584 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.