In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Students were likely to study in a university in their home countries. However, nowadays, they have more chances to have a further education in foreign countries. In my opinion, study abroad is more beneficial.
There are two main reasons to support studying abroad. Firstly, living in foreign countries broadens people’s horizons. When an environment and atmospheres have changed, foreign students have to adapt themselves in order to appropriately act in their new countries. This means they have to learn not only about how local people live there, but also different culture and traditions. Secondly, graduating in the foreign countries gives graduates opportunities to get a work permit. Some people think working abroad earns higher income than the home country. This means that they will have a better quality of life.
On the other hand, studying abroad also has negative aspects. The main problem is about language difficulties. When a lecture is not given in people’s mother languages. They have to face adversity in learning or even communicating with their classmates. Apart from that, being homesick seems to be the other important factor. In order to grant the university degree, the students need to study for at least 1 to 4 years depending on what they choose to study. Absolutely, there are lots of trouble they have to deal with. For instance, the weather conditions in Europe are quite terrible, especially in the winter compared with my home country, Thailand, where the weather is more stable.
In conclusion, although it is somewhat hard to get used to the languages and the weather conditions in the foreign country, studying abroad gives you new experience and also perspectives which lead you to become successful.
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- In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Some think this is good. While other believe this is a problem for s country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 73
- People think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to the modern buildings To what extent do you agree or disagree 89
- as a result of electronic inventions such as the computer and television, people do less physical activity, and this is having a negative effect on their health.to what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Graduates who can not find work in their chosen fields should be advised to do a second degree, rather than taking a job that does not interest them. To what extent do you agree with this statement. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, apart from, at least, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34163701068 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32834782078 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8521115596 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7894736842 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359813915707 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104320507463 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0734131635245 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219040879295 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0922714696897 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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