The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the changes in the aging population from 1940 to 2040 in the USA, Sweden and Japan.
Overall, the proportion of the elderly people in all three countries is expected to considerably increase, especially in the last 13 years of the period. That means life expectancy in those countries will be extremely high in the future.
The number of people at the age of 60 and more in the USA and Sweden is almost similar over the period. Accounting for 7% and 9% at the start of the period, the figure for senior citizens in the USA and Sweden rose gradually together. However, while the Sweden number continues to increase over the entire period, the USA had a slight decrease in 1995 and will increase again in 2027.
By contrast, there was a moderate decline in the aging population proportion in the first couple of decades, from 5% to 3%, and then the figure remained stable for over 20 years. After that, senior citizens increased gradually and steadily until the sudden jump in 2027, from 10% to 25%.
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- Nowadays many families move overseas for job opportunoties Some people think this is beneficial for the children of these families while others think children will find it difficult Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with the projections until 2030 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The maps below show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25 year period from 1980 and 2005 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The number of international visitors going to Australia continues to grow making the Australian government very aware of the importance of its tourism industry The chart below shows the spending patterns of these visitors while they are in Australia 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69444444444 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48880828242 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561111111111 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8347008532 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.625 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133509959191 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0624361220455 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591156687445 0.0843802449381 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958600419481 0.15604864568 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552181624457 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.