The graph below shows the reported number of cases of influenza in people over 65 in a certain village in the UK from 1985 to 1995

Grammar and spelling errors:
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The line graph illustrates the number of...
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...by influenza in a certain UK village. Overall,the number of cases followed inc...
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...a certain UK village. Overall,the number of cases followed increasing tre...
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Suggestion: is the highest
... people are effected by influenza which is highest number in the period,while lowest cases...
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Suggestion: , while
...za which is highest number in the period,while lowest cases are reported in the year 1...
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Suggestion: while the lowest
...a which is highest number in the period,while lowest cases are reported in the year 1985 wit...
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...reported in the year 1985 with 40 people . In detail,the number of rep...
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...ted in the year 1985 with 40 people . In detail,the number of reported cases o...
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...5 with 40 people . In detail,the number of reported cases of influenza b...
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...ses steadily to reach about 55 in 1987. In 1988,there was decrease in number to be...
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...mber to below 50 before rising to reach a highest number approximately 75 in 1991...
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...hest number approximately 75 in 1991. After 1991,the reported cases has fallen...
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...rted cases has fallen gradually for the next next two years to reach 60.People effected b...
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Suggestion: People
...for the next next two years to reach 60.People effected by flu rose slightly to about ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84507042254 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70060477938 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56338028169 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1008559809 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 5.23603664747 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343734665955 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181446728038 0.103423049105 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107574303322 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227211574894 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107392747242 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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